No no nno no no no!
You can't leave it here, argh, i'm crazy now. It's all so sweet and tragic and I wanted to cry, so you have to finish it soon! Soon! Skywise has to be healed.
I'm going to go back and read it.
Agh! It's still the same, all the pretty prose, and the sweetness, and the fluff mixed with...
Very good. Now that I'm done being a crazed fangirl, write more please.