Fan Art & Fiction
Nov 11, 2006
*camps out waiting for more*
Oh! Fans already! Cookies? *hands out virtual cookies*
(Small note: "You Sun Villagers feel too save in your nests" ought to read "You Sun Villagers feel to safe in your nests.")
Fixed. Thanks! (The save/safe part) Although the 'too' a opposed to 'to' is correct for the two o's is like 'too much' rather than 'he went to work'.
Err... English lesson over. (Can you tell I like English?) *goes back to pondering the next chapter*