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Woot! It's back!

Good development but there's a few things I should note:

1) What Shen-shen said to Rayek about respect for their "wished to be lifemates" doesn't make sense to me. It sounds as if Rayek and Leetah weren't nice to other elves who they wished to be their lifemates. Rayek only wanted Leetah and Leetah didn't want anyone.

2) Last sentence: "Rayek gave a slight nod" not a "slight not." :)