<opens refrigerator, asking, would you like whole, 2%, 1%, skim, or soy? And would you like regular, vanilla, strawberry, or chocolate?>
[aiming to please so you will continue writing]
The scene where Pike sees what is left of the holt (right after the fire's burned out and everything is still ashen)... that almost brought tears to my eyes!
I'm so glad that you added more!
I look forward to reading what you have for us next!