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lunakat

I love that last description of bearclaw! your drabbles (which I just went back and read) are all fantastic! You are such a good writer!

I feel like a jerk for mentioning this- but it's tripping up the bearclaw drabble for me. Like- i read this really powerful little piece of writing- and then get thrown out of the mood by just one little mistake.

"And in these moments there are only one thing to do."
It should be "in these moments there is only one thing to do." Because the subject isn't really 'moments' (even though it might seem that way at first glance)- the subject is "one thing to do." i know i'm a weirdo- but i just have to beg you to fix that so it's perfect!