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Tenderfoot


How About "The Kids Aren't Alright"?

In reference to the Song "The Kids Are Alright" by The Offspring

Just a random idea...


I'll note it Smile Thank you for all suggestions!



Tenderfoot,

I'm sorry it took so long for me to get back to you on this, but my life went shit as well, and I've been absent for quite awhile.


Life goes shit sometimes. I don't think I've been in here since... February. *winces* Sorry, life happened. It does all the time.


You are always welcome for the critiques. Your style is incredible, and I look forward to reading more of your fiction, fan-based or not. I took the time to reread this while I'm here, and my anticipation meter is rising, too.


Aww, now you're making me blush! *points to self* See?

I've always been told I'm good at writing, but positive critique never ceases to amaze me. Smile Glad I was able to pull off the whole 'cliffhanger-thingy', I've always though I'm lousy at that.


WHAT HAPPENS?


YOU WILL SEE... Smile


For the love of SHOES, what's going on at the end?


*has never had a particular love for shoes, but BOOKS...* What's going on at the end is the very beginning of the action, I would say. At least it is the end of what up till then can be considered normal.


I'm dying for more.


Nooo, don't do that! Then you won't get to know what happens next! And I will lose a potential reader!


Please continue writing!!


Will do Wink