Skywise and Yun sharing an adventure ... a very welcome scene. This "invisible" bear is menacing! I like your way to tell the complete sory behind his snapshot by body language, facial expressions and ... shadows, Elwing. Awesome take an a bear hunt! About the loose grip on the spear - good eye, Startear. She wouldn't hold her weapon carelessly. You can interpret this detail in a different way though: Yun is caught in movement. She tries to get a better fighting position. For me it's easy to imagine that she adjusts her grip to the new angle this very moment. I like the difference in their expressions - while Skywise looks worried, almost afraid of the danger ahead Yun is just determined and concentrated on "the next task". You could judge on character traits and differences just by this - Yun's Go-Back heritage shows.